Mar 30 2005

Questions About Schiavo

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 11:08 am


A heart attack places you into what is described by some as a “vegetative state” while family members battle for fifteen years over whether you should be allowed to die or to continue to linger on in the hopes that a miracle will occur. It sounds like the premise of a horror story, presuming that the victim is actually aware of what is going on. But that’s the big question: is Terri Schiavo aware of what is happening around her?

As the legal battle continues about whether they should reconnect the feeding tube — and at this point, has enough damage not already beendone by the lack of nourishment that it would be more humane to let her go? — I have to wonder about these statements I keep hearing:

If she is in a non-responsive vegetative state

If she can’t feel pain and isn’t aware of any suffering connected with the lack of starvation…

If she isn’t aware of what is happening to her and doesn’t have the cognitive ability to recognize that her wishes are finally being carried out…

How can she be “resting comfortably?” How can she be “at peace?”

Don’t comfort and peace require some level of contentment? Does someone without the ability to feel anything or think for herself have the ability to be content?


Mar 30 2005

My Problem with the Schiavo Case

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 10:13 am

As the legal battle continues about whether they should reconnect the feeding tube — and at this point, has enough damage not already been done by the lack of nourishment that it would be more humane to let her go? — I have to wonder about these statements I keep hearing:

If she is in a non-responsive vegetative state…

If she can’t feel pain and isn’t aware of any suffering connected with the lack of starvation…

If she isn’t aware of what is happening to her and doesn’t have the cognitive ability to recognize that her wishes are finally being carried out…

How can she be “resting comfortably?” How can she be “at peace?”

Don’t comfort and peace require some level of contentment? Does someone without the ability to feel anything or think for herself have the ability to be content?


Mar 29 2005

"Monster" Food

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 10:20 am


This morning on the Today show, I saw a segment about fast food getting “big” again. It’s not surprising to me, really…I knew that the elimination of “Supersize” couldn’t last for long.

Burger King has just introduced a new breakfast item, the “Enormous Omelet Sandwich.” Enormous is right: this sandwich of two eggs, cheese, sausage AND bacon packs 730 calories and 40 grams of fat.

How much is that? According to Nutritionist Heidi Skolnik, for the 18-24 year olds, fast foods biggest customers, the average intake is 2400-2800 calories and anywhere from 60-100 grams of fat.

I’m not much of a breakfast person. I’m more of a lunch and dinner type of guy. But there are plenty of foods that tip the scale for those meals:

Burger King’s Double Whopper with Cheese has 1060 calories and 69 grams of fat. Been there, done that.

McDonald’s Double Quarter Pounder with Cheese has 730 calories and 40 grams of fat. Been there, done that, too.

Hardee’s Monster Thick Burger has 1420 calories and 107 grams of fat. I can honestly say I haven’t tried that one. That much fat in a single meal scares me. I’m not the type to balance such a meal by having a nice serving of tofu later in the day.

Even Pizza Hut has the Meat Lover’s XL pizza where two slices equal 1000 calories and 44 grams of fat. When I go to the Hut, I get medium size. I hope that counts for something, because I don’t know anyone who stops after just two slices of pizza!

I wonder if that director who produced the documentary about McDonald’s food — you know who I’m talking about…he ate only McDonald’s for a month and was “shocked” to discover that he gained weight! — is planning a follow-up documentary to deal with any of these bigger subjects.

Sure, we’re fatter than ever. But don’t blame these restaurants. The person you should be pointing at is the one staring back at you in the mirror. “If you build it, they will come,” is the popular line that some people like to throw around when they place blame. But just because people show up doesn’t mean they have to buy the most fattening items on the menu. For every grease-laden sandwich, there are salads. No one puts a gun to our heads and commands us to buy the “bad” food. Unfortunately, no one puts a gun to our head and commands us to eat our vegetables, either.

The secret to losing weight, as with virtually everything else — including writing! — is simply wanting to! If you want to lose weight badly enough, you won’t have to count carbs or calories or fat grams: common sense will tell you what is going to give you nourishment and what is going to just supply more padding.


Mar 29 2005

"Shoddy" Reporting - Revisited

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 10:10 am

The story about a Kentucky student arrested after writing what he called a “zombie story” is still inspiring comments, and, as expected, still causing more people to blame the media for the whole thing. I received the following comment on my earlier piece about what constitutes “Shoddy” Reporting?:

The shoddy reporting wasn’t just get two sides. Media is expected to do more than that. They are explected to check facts. (Was there a story? Did it mention zombies? Was it assigned? Was there evidence beyond the journal — Answers: There were two stories; they were about a pseudo-military group taking over a school by force and did notmention zombies, a zombie or anything described in such a manner as to lead one to believe there were zombies or a zombie in the story; Poole had no such assignment, and seven documents taken — six in addition to the journal.)

They are expected to show both sides of the story without taking sides. How did they take sides? Well, the cop’s quote was cut so that it didn’t make sense. Now, that couldhave been fixed two ways — use the complete quote explaining the felony or use the partial quote and use the law itself to explain the felony. But WLEX chose to air and send out over the AP wire the partial quote.

Poole made a statement that half the school knew him and knew he wasn’t “that stupid, that crazy.” They could have interviewed other students to see if that description was accurate. (Hey, even the guy’s own brother appeared on TV saying that William Poole belonged in jail because he was dangerous.)

WLEX was irresponsible at the least. Possibly, in their attempt to get “The Big Story” (this is one of their promotional themes — each night they air “The Big Story”) they were even unethical. Either way — yes it’s shoddy reporting.

I do agree with with you that the news consumers didn’t ask much before assuming, but the story was slanted towards the student and news consumers tend to trust their media to fully cover the story. The blame lies first with the media.

It sounds as though this commenter lives in WLEX’s market. I don’t…I merely used their version of the story as an example since they were able to land the interview with the student himself. But a few points are worth addressing.

He or she says the media is supposed to check the facts. Naturally. They got the facts from the student who wrote the story, and got a differing opinion from the police who were prosecuting him. When a court case is being litigated, they won’t get any more facts than what is released to them. That’s just life. It’s not their fault that specific details weren’t available; but they did have two sides of the story and both sides gave a representation of the facts that were available at that time.

They didn’t so much take sides as present the story of a student who says he is innocent of charges he faces. How many people being prosecuted say they didn’t do it? WLEX didn’t say he didn’t do it, they only said that he said he didn’t do it. They followed this with a police quote in which a detective said he did do it. You must decide for yourself. The media didn’t say he did or didn’t. That’s fair reporting. I find nothing irresponsible in the WLEX story I quoted, even after having learned more about the story since.

As for the police quote being cut down, this happens every day in every story: if newscasts were two hours long instead of thirty minutes, maybe they wouldn’t have to do so…but then again, this is where the news consumers come in. If they were willing to sit through news that long, the local stations would be delighted to produce that type of programming.

He or she suggests that they should have interviewed his classmates to find out if they thought he was crazy. What facts would this provide? To be fair, they would have to seek out people who said he was and wasn’t, and they would have to trust that the people they interviewed actually knew who they were talking about…there’s no way they can know that. Plus, in case you aren’t aware, a camera crew cannot simply walk into a school and interview students without parental and school permission. Given the circumstances, it’s only natural to expect that they would have had a hard time getting it.

I am not aware of the student’s brother appearing on television to side against the student. But the story was very clear that the student was turned in not by classmateswho were trying to pull a prank, but by his own grandparents. People automatically assumed that the grandparents were either senile or overreacting — or both — in calling police. Why does it lend more credibility if another family member says he’s dangerous? If they didn’t believe the grandparents, why believe the brother?

The media is not supposed to “spoon feed” the truth to you. In these days of constant accusations of bias, it would be ridiculous of anyone to watch a story about something being disputed and assume that they know the full truth. The best that the media can do — and what it should be expected to do — is to give those sides and let you decide for yourself what you believe. If you later find new information not available earlier, and this new information changes your mind, there’s no reason to blame anyone for this: it says a lot that someone is willing to consider new details with enough of an open mind that his opinion can be changed to begin with.

The comment’s last line speaks volumes: “I do agree with with you that the news consumers didn’t ask much before assuming, but the story was slanted towards the student and news consumers tend to trust their media to fully cover the story. The blame lies first with the media.” If people really distrust the media as much as they like to say, it is asinine for them to then blindly trust the media to fully cover the story to begin with. Where does this trust begin and where does it end?

With all respect, I have found that the blame only lies first with the media mostly in the minds of those who prefer that the media to do all of their thinking for them.


Mar 26 2005

Saturday Six - Episode 50

Tag: Saturday SixPatrick @ 9:55 am

Well this will be my first “Saturday Six” as an Editor’s Top Pick. I suppose I should quickly explain for the newcomers how this works:

It’s basically a set of six random questions. You’ve seen such things in other journals; there’s nothing particularly special about these questions versus the “Friday Five,” for example, except that my set has one more question one day later!

You either answer the questions here in a comment, or you answer them in an entry in your journal and leave a comment here with the link to that specific entry. There is no time limit, you’re not considered “late” if you play on Sunday or even if you play months later. What I hope you will do, whether you play or not, is visit the journals of those who do play: you can find some of the best journals in AOL among the commenters here each week! (And no, you don’t have to have an AOL journal to play…only an AOL screen name to comment.)

This is the 50th edition of the “Saturday Six.” A while back, a race of sorts began, with different journalers trying to be the “first” to play each week. The record holder for the most first-time players is Scott of “Stories From My Ambulance” and he’s a tough one to beat when he’s online! To be counted as the “first one to play,” you have to be the first one to answer the questions in full in a comment here or be first to leave a link to the specific entry — not just the journal’s general address — in which you answered the questions. Simple, right?

Last week, Beth, of “My Life…My Journey” was the first one to play. Congratulations to her!

Another tradition is to recognize those who play who have never played before. This gives those folks an extra “plug” for their journals; hopefully, they come back week after week so that others can find their journals from links in the comments.

Last week’s set of questions were the first playings for
Compassionatevegan, Tami and Melissa. Be sure to visit their journals and say hello.

So…let’s have a new set of questions, shall we? This week, the case of Terri Schiavo has been dominating news headlines from coast to coast. The first four questions will pertain to this theme in general.

1. Do you believe that Terri Schiavo should be allowed to die or that she should be kept alive?

2. Has the Schiavo case made you take any action towards creating a living will of your own?

3. Let’s forget what we know — or more likely, what we think we know — about Schiavo’s condition. If you suffered a brain injury that would leave you in a non-responsive vegetative state (whether Schiavo is in this state or not) and your doctors said that there was so much brain damage that there would be no hope of recovery, would you want to be kept alive no matter what?

4. Has anyone outside of your immediate family ever asked you to be their “personal representative” to make such a decision on their behalf if they ever suffer a severe injury? Do you think you could really make the decision?

5. Do you have a special outfit ready for Easter Sunday? Does your family have any special Easter traditions?

6. What room of your house is the absolute messiest? Would you ever let a house guest see it?

MY ANSWERS:
1. This is a difficult one. I can understand that her parents don’t want their child to die; I can understand that her husband believes she would not want to be kept alive. The longer she does live, the harder it will be for her family to let go, which is why we’re in the legal battle we’re in now. I have read stories of people who have been in comas for years suddenly waking up; she’s not in a coma. Brain damage is different: the brain tissue doesn’t repair itself. I don’t think there is any way she will ever improve. But there is something cruel about letting her starve to death over time, even if it’s true that she doesn’t have the capacity to feel discomfort or pain. That’s not really an answer…but it’s the best I can do at the moment. Sometimes I even stump myself!

2. I’ve certainly thought about it, but I haven’t taken any action, yet.

3. If there was no hope of recovery and I was in a vegetative state and non-responsive, I wouldn’t want to go on that way. I think it would be too painful for those around me.

4. My best friend has asked me to serve in this capacity. I hope I’m never actually required to do so, but I think I would be able to make a decision with proper reports from his doctors should the need ever arise.

5. No special outfit for easter. My family doesn’t really have a traditional meal for Easter, although Mom always does the cooking rather than us going out to eat that day. My parents are coming to town this weekend, so Mom will do the cooking here on Sunday!

6. My bedroom (and its closet). Nope.


Mar 25 2005

"Monster" Food

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 10:08 am

This morning on the Today show, I saw a segment about fast food getting “big” again. It’s not surprising to me, really…I knew that the elimination of “Supersize” couldn’t last for long.

Burger King has just introduced a new breakfast item, the “Enormous Omelet Sandwich.” Enormous is right: this sandwich of two eggs, cheese, sausage AND bacon packs 730 calories and 40 grams of fat.

How much is that? According to Nutritionist Heidi Skolnik, for the 18-24 year olds, fast foods biggest customers, the average intake is 2400-2800 calories and anywhere from 60-100 grams of fat.

I’m not much of a breakfast person. I’m more of a lunch and dinner type of guy. But there are plenty of foods that tip the scale for those meals:

Burger King’s Double Whopper with Cheese has 1060 calories and 69 grams of fat. Been there, done that.

McDonald’s Double Quarter Pounder with Cheese has 730 calories and 40 grams of fat. Been there, done that, too.

Hardee’s Monster Thick Burger has 1420 calories and 107 grams of fat. I can honestly say I haven’t tried that one. For me, that much fat is frightening.

Even Pizza Hut has the Meat Lover’s XL pizza where two slices equal 1000 calories and 44 grams of fat. When I go to the Hut, I get medium size. I hope that counts for something, because I don’t know anyone who stops after just two slices of pizza!

I wonder if that director who produced the documentary about McDonald’s food — you know who I’m talking about…he ate nothing but McDonald’s fare for a month and was “shocked” to discover that he gained weight! — is planning a follow-up documentary to deal with any of these bigger subjects.

Sure, we’re fatter than ever. But don’t blame these restaurants. The person you should be pointing at is the one staring back at you in the mirror. “If you build it, they will come,” is the popular line that some people like to throw around when they place blame. But just because people show up doesn’t mean they have to buy the most fattening items on the menu. For every grease-laden sandwich, there are salads. No one puts a gun to our heads and commands us to buy the “bad” food. Unfortunately, no one puts a gun to our head and commands us to eat our vegetables, either.

The secret to losing weight…the real secret to success…is wanting to. As with virtually everything else, if you want to lose weight badly enough, you won’t have to count carbs or calories or fat grams: common sense will tell you what is going to give you nourishment and what is going to just supply more padding.


Mar 25 2005

"Patrick’s Place" Receives Top Honors at AOL

Tag: AOL, BloggingPatrick @ 10:02 am

For the first time since its inception, “Patrick’s Place” has been honored as an Editor’s Top Pick. What’s more, it got the #1 slot. Ironically, an alternate journal, “The Faces of AOL J-Land,” (now defunct), got the second slot.

Thanks to all of those who have E-mailed me congratulating me…I appreciate the kind words and your generous attention each week. To those of you who are visiting for the first time, click the box on the sidebar just above the mailbox and you’ll get a sample of earlier writing I’ve done here.

And be sure to visit tomorrow for the “Saturday Six!


Mar 23 2005

Why I Didn’t Write This Morning

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 11:04 am


My therapist — yes, I’ve been seeing a therapist for two months now — suggested that I start a journal. (If he only knew…)

His idea was to write about being stressed out, the causes of my stress (if I can identify them) and to give myself a “stress rating” on a scale of one to ten, with ten being the most stressed. After my first visit, I did this faithfully for two weeks then went back and took him a copy. He is presumably reading it, or already has, and so since then, I haven’t written much in it.

The thought occurred to me on Monday that I need to devote a set amount of time to my novel writing, an idea that I have resisted in the past because I was afraid that “forced” writing time wouldn’t produce quality writing. (Doesn’t it sound presumptious to think that my writing done when I wasn’t making myself do it is “quality!”)

But I haven’t felt like writing in my novel for the past two days. This morning, I reopened that stress journal in Word and started writing a few notes to update things since my last entry on February 28th. I wrote three pages. It just came pouring out of me. The bitching and moaning, the whining about life in general, the specifics of things that have stressed me out over the past week and the fears that stress me out about the future…they all just came like a flood onto the paper.

There are days when I am trying to write a single scene of my manuscript when I can’t seem to get one page I’m happy with when I’m trying. Today, I get three pages about my “character” and my “plotline” without really trying. How frustrating. I think I’ll have another entry to write tomorrow because of this!


Mar 21 2005

Kentucky Fried Zombies vs. News Consumers

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 10:55 am


Because I work in the media, I hear all the time about how bad a job the media does at reporting the news. In my last post, I updated a story about a Kentucky high school student arrested after writing a story he claimed was about zombies attacking a high school. The update consisted of new information from a court hearing in which a police detective testified about the contents of the story.

I addressed the fact that when the story was originally published, many people automatically sided with the student, and accused the student’s grandparents who turned him in and the local authorities of overreacting.

One of the comments I received at my AOL journal, “Patrick’s Place” was this:

Well this definitely sheds new light on the story. However I don’t necessarily agree that we overreacted to the original story. The blame lies with the media who did such a shoddy job of reporting on what actually happened. I read about a story in which a child wrote about zombies attacking his school and was subsequently arrested for it. That sounded plain idiotic to me and I said so. In light of this most recent information hardly any of the first story was even correct. The editor who let that first story out should be fired.

The blame lies with the media? Surprise, surprise. A Shoddy job? I hear this all the time. The “media” never gets it right! What facts from the first story were proven “incorrect” by the second? The second story merely added more details. Fire the editor? Wouldn’t that be as extreme an action as everyone thought the authorities were taking?

I’m going to do something I rarely do now: I am going to post an entire article from an outside source, rather than simply linking to it. I believe that it is important that you see the full story at once. So, with no intended challenge to copyright, here is the original story:

A George Rogers Clark High School junior arrested Tuesday for making terrorist threats told LEX 18 News Thursday that the “writings” that got him arrested are being taken out of context.

Winchester police say William Poole, 18, was taken into custody Tuesday morning. Investigators say they discovered materials at Poole’s home that outline possible acts of violence aimed at students, teachers, and police.

Poole told LEX 18 that the whole incident is a big misunderstanding. He claims that what his grandparents found in his journal and turned into police was a short story he wrote for English class.

“My story is based on fiction,” said Poole, who faces a second-degree felony terrorist threatening charge. “It’s a fake story. I made it up. I’ve been working on one of my short stories, (and) the short story they found was about zombies. Yes, it did say a high school. It was about a high school over ran by zombies.”

Even so, police say the nature of the story makes it a felony. “Anytime you make any threat or possess matter involving a school or function it’s a felony in the state of Kentucky,” said Winchester Police detective Steven Caudill.

Poole disputes that he was threatening anyone.

“It didn’t mention nobody who lives in Clark County, didn’t mention (George Rogers Clark High School), didn’t mention no principal or cops, nothing,” said Poole. “Half the people at high school know me. They know I’m not that stupid, that crazy.”

On Thursday, a judge raised Poole’s bond from one to five thousand dollars after prosecutors requested it, citing the seriousness of the charge.

Poole is being held at the Clark County Detention Center.

This story Copyright ©2005 WorldNow and WLEX-TV.

Let’s consider this story: there are two primary sides being presented. The first side is that of a student who says he was writing a story about “zombies” and meant no harm. The second side is that of authorities who said that the story consists of “possible acts of violence aimed at students, teachers, and police.”

We hear from the student, who apparently granted the media an interview to say that he was being misunderstood. He gives few details of his story, but rather talks about what it isn’t about. He says he is innocent.

We hear from the authorities; specifically the same police detective who testified in court about the specifics of the case, who explains that making a threat is a felony in Kentucky. We also hear from the school principal who addresses the student’s claim that he was doing an assignment for English class.

Two sides of the story. Claims are addressed by the opposite sides. It’s balanced because we do hear from both sides and there is an interaction of the facts presented since both sides answer pretty much the same questions.

We do not have the specifics of the story, but this is understandable because police are never going to release specifics to the media before a court hearing. We are lucky they had this much to say prior to the hearing itself. The student who agreed to an interview shouldn’t be expected to give details that might make him look guilty when he is proclaiming his innocence. We do not have an interview from the grandparents who turned the student in; they apparently did not want to be interviewed, but it is possible no one asked them. The real story is that a student who says he did nothing wrong is facing felony charges.

We get both sides of that story.

What is funny to me isn’t the “shoddy” nature of the reporting, but rather the “shoddy” nature of the news consumers who read the story. They expect the news to be fair and balanced, yet they read this story, and almost invariably take sides with the student. They criticize the authorities for taking action against a student the authorities assume must be wrong; yet they are assuming that the student must be right. (As I have said, our legal system requires that he be assumed innocent until proven otherwise; the problem is that some readers seem to think that the matter shouldn’t even be investigated.)

Then comes the new information. Reread the new story, which even addresses the internet furor here. Consider that there are still basically two sides of the story: a student who claims he was misunderstood and is being unfairly prosecuted, and authorities who believe otherwise.

There are muddied waters in this new story, because it addresses the fact that the blogosphere jumped into the mix to champion the student’s cause. But this isn’t a “side” in the story; it’s merely support for one of the two primary sides.

The story doesn’t quote specifically Poole; it does summarize his claims of innocence and uses his internet sympathizers to get his “side” onto the table. The new information in this story is the specifics of courtroom testimony, which paint a very different picture of the situation than the one Poole himself gave us.

Is this shoddy reporting? No, it’s continuing coverage of a story that has produced new information. Should readers be angry about this new information? Only if they jumped to the same kind of conclusion they accused authorities of jumping to: that’s the only reason they’d feel like they’d been “had.” If they were open-minded, these new details shouldn’t make them angry.

Another commenter said: “Bottom line …. Never believe anything you read….or at least, not until you’ve heard the opposing viewpoint.” That’s very true. In this case, we had the opposing viewpoint, yet most people still took only the student’s word for it. Neither side, in that first story, gave a great deal of information about the story itself. Yet why did so many automatically assume that the authorities were overreacting?

Kentucky was indeed home of the Paducah shootings as another commenter pointed out. Perhaps it is understandable that they would take anything that could be considered a threat more seriously than other authorities might.

Shoddy reporting? No. As Shakespeare said, “The fault, dear Brutus, is not in our stars, but in ourselves….” As with all other things, we see, hear and read exactly what we want to.


Mar 21 2005

Which Zodiac Personality Are You?

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 10:26 am


I found this quiz at Josh’s “Much Ado About Nothing.” I was born a Sagittarius, and generally find that I fit the “typical” traits of that sign quite well. This quiz, however, says I have the personality of a Gemini.

Discover your Zodiac Personality
Discover your Zodiac Personality @ Quiz Me

Interesting.


Mar 21 2005

"Shoddy" Reporting?

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 10:14 am

Recently I updated a story about a Kentucky high school student arrested after writing a story he claimed was about zombies attacking a high school. The update consisted of new information from a court hearing in which a police detective testified about the contents of the story.

I addressed the fact that when the story was originally published, many people automatically sided with the student, and accused the student’s grandparents who turned him in and the local authorities of overreacting.

One of the comments I received was this:

Well this definitely sheds new light on the story. However I don’t necessarily agree that we overreacted to the original story. The blame lies with the media who did such a shoddy job of reporting on what actually happened. I read about a story in which a child wrote about zombies attacking his school and was subsequently arrested for it. That sounded plain idiotic to me and I said so. In light of this most recent information hardly any of the first story was even correct. The editor who let that first story out should be fired.

A Shoddy job? I hear this all the time. The “media” never gets it right! Let’s play the “Blame Game” and see whether this is really shoddy or not. Nothing in the original story is correct? The new story didn’t change the facts; it merely added new dimensions to them! Fire the editor? That action seems as extreme as those who read the original story felt that the authorities’ actions were!

I’m going to do something I rarely do now: I am going to post an entire article from an outside source, rather than simply linking to it. I believe that it is important that you see the full story at once. Here is the original story:

A George Rogers Clark High School junior arrested Tuesday for making terrorist threats told LEX 18 News Thursday that the “writings” that got him arrested are being taken out of context.

Winchester police say William Poole, 18, was taken into custody Tuesday morning. Investigators say they discovered materials at Poole’s home that outline possible acts of violence aimed at students, teachers, and police.

Poole told LEX 18 that the whole incident is a big misunderstanding. He claims that what hisgrandparents found in his journal and turned into police was a short story he wrote for English class.

“My story is based on fiction,” said Poole, who faces a second-degree felony terrorist threatening charge. “It’s a fake story. I made it up. I’ve been working on one of my short stories, (and) the short story they found was about zombies. Yes, it did say a high school. It was about a high school over ran by zombies.”

Even so, police say the nature of the story makes it a felony. “Anytime you make any threat or possess matter involving a school or function it’s a felony in the state of Kentucky,” said Winchester Police detective Steven Caudill.

Poole disputes that he was threatening anyone.

“It didn’t mention nobody who lives in Clark County, didn’t mention (George Rogers Clark High School), didn’t mention no principal or cops, nothing,” said Poole. “Half the people at high school know me. They know I’m not that stupid, that crazy.”

On Thursday, a judge raised Poole’s bond from one to five thousand dollars after prosecutors requested it, citing the seriousness of the charge.

Poole is being held at the Clark County Detention Center.

This story Copyright ©2005 WorldNow and WLEX-TV.

Let’s consider this story: there are two primary sides being presented. The first side is that of a student who says he was writing a story about “zombies” and meant no harm. The second side is that of authorities who said that the story consists of “possible acts of violence aimed at students, teachers, and police.”

We hear from the student, who apparently granted the media an interview to say that he was being misunderstood. He gives few details of his story, but rather talks about what it isn’t about. He says he is innocent.

We hear from the authorities; specifically the same police detective who would later testify in court about the specifics of the case, who explains that making a threat is a felony in Kentucky. We also hear from the school principal who addresses the student’s claim that he was doing an assignment for English class.

Two sides of the story. Claims are addressed by the opposite sides. It’s balanced because we do hear from both sides and there is an interaction of the facts presented since both sides answer pretty much the same questions.

We do not have the specifics of the story, but this is understandable because police are never going to release specifics to the media before a court hearing. We are lucky they had this much to say prior to the hearing itself. The student who agreed to an interview shouldn’t be expected to give details that might make him look guilty when he is proclaiming his innocence. We do not have an interview from the grandparents who turned the student in; they apparently did not want to be interviewed, but it is possible no one asked them. The real story is that a student who says he did nothing wrong is facing felony charges.

We get both sides of that story.

What is funny to me isn’t the “shoddy” nature of the reporting, but rather the “shoddy” nature of the news consumers who read the story…the same people who expect the news to be fair and balanced, yet read this story, and almost invariably take sides with the student. They criticize the authorities for taking action against a student, insisting that the action of these authorities is not only wrong but outrageous. (As I have said, our legal system requires that he be assumed innocent until proven otherwise; the problem is that some readers seem to think that the matter shouldn’t even be investigated.)

Then comes the new information. Reread the newer story, which even addresses the internet furor. Consider that there are still basically two sides of the story: a student who claims he was misunderstood and is being unfairly prosecuted, and authorities who believe otherwise.

There are muddied waters in this new story, because it addresses the fact that the blogosphere jumped into the mix to champion the student’s cause. But this isn’t a “side” in the story; it’s merely support for one of the two primary sides.

The story doesn’t quote specifically Poole; it does summarize his claims of innocence and uses his internet sympathizers to get his “side” onto the table. The new information in this story is the specifics of courtroom testimony, which paint a very different picture of the situation than the one Poole himself gave us.

Is this shoddy reporting? No, it’s continuing coverage of a story that has produced new information. Should readers be angry about this new information? Only if they jumped to the same kind of conclusion they accused authorities of jumping to: that’s the only reason they’d feel like they’d been “had.”

Another commenter said: “Bottom line …. Never believe anything you read….or at least, not until you’ve heard the opposing viewpoint.” That’s very true. In this case, we had the opposing viewpoint, yet most people still took only the student’s word for it. Neither side, in that first story, gave a great deal of information about the story itself. Yet why did so many automatically assume that the authorities were in the wrong?

Kentucky was indeed home of the Paducah shootings as another commented pointed out. Perhaps it is understandable that they would take anything that could be considered a threat more seriously than other authorities might. It may seem outrageous to us; if we lived near Paducah, it might not seem that way.

Shoddy reporting? No. As Shakespeare said, “The fault, dear Brutus, is not in our stars, but in ourselves….” As with all other things, we see, hear and read exactly what we want to, even when the opposing viewpoints are right there in front of us.


Mar 19 2005

Saturday Six - Episode 49

Tag: Saturday SixPatrick @ 9:56 am

I spent the morning volunteering with the animal shelter. Having spent time with some four-legged friends, I realized it was time to spend some time asking six more questions.

But first…

Scott reclaimed his first-to-play status after being beaten by fellow Hawaiian Chris the week before! Congratulations, Scott!

Denielle played for the first time this week, and almost was first to play as well! It was also the first time playing the Six for Ann Marie, Jennie, and Beth! Be sure to visit their journals to say hello.

Now on to this week’s questions! Either answer the questions in a comment here, or put the answers in an entry on your journal…but either way, leave a link to your journal so that everyone else can visit! If you don’t have an AOL journal, you can still play, but of course you’ll at least need an AOL screen name, which you can get for free with AOL Instant Messenger, to be able to leave a comment here. To be counted as “first to play,” you must be the first player to either answer the questions in a comment or to provide a complete link to the specific entry in your journal in which you answer the questions. A link to your journal in general cannot count. (And if you’re playing for the first time, please be sure to say so in the comment!) Enjoy!

1. You know company is coming: do you panic and immediately begin cleaning house or do you sit back and relax because your place is already clean?

2. Which was a bigger surprise for you:
a) Robert Blake was acquitted
b) Martha Stewart did jail time
c) Scott Peterson was sentenced to death
d) The Michael Jackson trial began at all

3. What was in the last package you received in the mail?

4. What commercial annoys you the most at the moment?

5. What charity was the last one to call you to solicit a donation? Did you give them money? Why or why not?

6. What common household product do you hate to run out of the most?

If you have a Reader’s Choice question you’d like to see asked (and answered), click the e-mail link on the About Me bar and send it to me.

MY ANSWERS:
1. Panic and clean like a madman!

2. A. It sounds like the jury still thinks he did the crime, even if he won’t do the time.

3. A pair of books I didn’t order; they were returned unopen and marked “Refused.” That’ll show ‘em!

4. Burger King’s “Tendercrisp Chicken Cheddar Bacon Ranch” spot with Hootie and the Blowfish’s Darius Rucker dressed up like a cowboy! I can’t get that tune out of my head. (I did try the sandwich…not bad at all!)

5. A local police officer’s fund. I didn’t donate, because there are so many of these organizations that it’s hard to find out which ones are legit and which ones aren’t. When I have extra money to donate, I check out the website of my state’s Attorney General for a list of charities that actually use the money rather than those that squander it.

6. Toilet paper! But I buy in bulk, so it never happens.


Mar 18 2005

Kentucky Fried Zombies

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 10:21 am

In an earlier post in my alternate journal, A Stop at Willoughby, I wrote about the case of William Poole, a Kentucky high school student who was arrested for writing what he called a “zombie story” that police believed threatened his high school and its students. It turns out that Poole’s grandparents had discovered the story in his journal, and after reading it, they were concerned enough to notify authorities.

The situation sent the blogosphere into overdrive, where people were calling Kentucky authorities every name in the book becuase they were stupidly cramping a student’s creativity by over-reacting. These same people, who were so quick to condemn the police for jumping to conclusions (while they themselves jumped to the conclusion that the student couldn’t have been making any real threats), likely won’t be mentioning the article I’m about to reference.

Since I believe in hearing both sides of the story, I direct you to a recent article in the Lexington Herald-Leader, which includes testimony from Winchester police Detective Steven Caudill, that Poole’s story not only wasn’t about “brain-eating dead folks,” (the story apparently never mentions the word “zombie” at all) but rather contained “evidence that he had tried to solicit seven fellow students to join him in a military organization called ‘No Limited Soldiers.’”

The writings, according to Caudill, describe a bloody shootout in “Zone 2,” the designation given to Clark County. Caudill also stated that the student “corresponded with someone in Barbourville who claimed to have acquired cash and guns in break-ins.”

In the spirit of maintaining both sides of the story, I am the first to acknowledge that it is entirely possible that Poole never intended to hurt anyone and was merely exercising creative freedom on paper. Until he is convicted of anything, we must assume that this is the case.

But after this new information that has been largely ignored by the bloggers who seem more interested in crucifying local police and the student’s grandparents who turned him in, one has to wonder what they would have said if nothing had beendone, and — hypothetically — an attack had subsequently occurred. Would these same finger pointers have been standing behind police, defending their lack of action that might have prevented the potential tragic outcome on the grounds that they didn’t stifle anyone’s creative endeavors?

Somehow, I doubt it.


Mar 18 2005

A Call to AOL

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 10:19 am

Apparently AOL’s financial success rests solely on my shoulders. An odd idea, I know, but it must be true!

A few days ago, I received one of those blue E-mails explaining that AOL was unable to bill me because my credit card had expired. I immediately updated the credit card information since I had already received the new card that is good through 2008.

A done deal. Or so I thought…

Two days later, I received another blue E-mail. This time, it read: “We were unable to process your most recent payment. Did you recently change your bank, phone number or credit card?” Over the next 24 hours, each of my alternate screen names received the same message. This, apparently, was a crisis of epic proportions. Urgent! Red Alert! Battlestations!

Or something.

Last evening, I called AOL’s toll-free number to find out what was causing the glitch. I listened to the nice elevator music, assuming that it was taking a long time for my call to reach Bangladesh, and suddenly I was met with a friendly operator.

Actually, it was a very friendly operator. His name was Dave — or so he said…there’s no real way to know whether they ever give their real names — and he didn’t have the slightest hint of an accent. I’m pretty good at spotting accents: if he was foreign, he had perfect diction and therefore probably wouldn’t have been working for the measly amount AOL is paying to its outsourced operators.

He explained that there was a problem with AOL’s automated alerts: everyone who updates their billing information receives the same “urgent” messages. At one point, when he was addressing me, he said “my friend.” That was nice, although I’m sure he doesn’t really consider me his friend. He was so pleasant, in fact, that I think even I might have had a hard time maintaining my anger if I had called in a really foul mood. He was that nice!

That’s mighty powerful psychological warfare these call centers are using nowadays! It’s the perfect foil to those of us whose blood pressure rises while we’re waiting to be connected because we’re expecting that operator with the thick accent who can’t understand us and who we can’t understand, either.

But this psychological warfare definitely worked. I like this Dave guy. In spite of myself! After a two minute conversation, I’d have been happy to hang out with him. I might even have bought the beer! How sad is that?


Mar 17 2005

More on the Kentucky Fried Zombies

Tag: UncategorizedPatrick @ 11:10 pm

In an earlier post, I wrote about the case of William Poole, an 18-year-old Kentucky high school student who was arrested for writing what he called a “zombie story” that police believed threatened his high school and its students.

The situation sent the blogosphere into overdrive, where people were calling Kentucky authorities every name in the book becuase they were stupidly cramping a student’s creativity by over-reacting. These same people, who were so quick to condemn the police for jumping to conclusions (while they themselves jumped to the conclusion that the student couldn’t have been making any real threats), likely won’t be mentioing this development.

On the other hand, I believe in hearing both sides of the story. So I direct you to a recent article in the Lexington Herald-Leader, which includes testimony from Winchester police Detective Steven Caudill, that Poole’s story not only wasn’t about “brain-eating dead folks,” (the word “zombie” never appeared in the story) but rather contained “evidence that he had tried to solicit seven fellow students to join him in a military organization called ‘No Limited Soldiers.’”

The writings, according to Caudill, describe a bloody shootout in “Zone 2,” the designation given to Clark County. Caudill also stated that the student “corresponded with someone in Barbourville who claimed to have acquired cash and guns in break-ins.”

In the spirit of maintaining both sides of the story, I am the first to acknowledge that it is entirely possible that Poole never intended to hurt anyone and was merely exercising creative freedom on paper. Until he is convicted of anything, we must assume that this is the case. I have yet to see Poole’s story published anywhere online; even so, someone not connected to the school or that specific area could easily miss “clues” that locals would read very differently.

But after this new information that has been largely ignored by the bloggers who seem more interested in crucifying local police and the student’s grandparents who turned him in, one has to wonder what they would have said if nothing had been done, and — hypothetically — an attack had subsequently occurred. Would these same finger pointers have been standing behind police, defending their lack of action that might have prevented the potential tragic outcome because they didn’t step in and thereby stifle anyone’s creative endeavors?

Somehow, I doubt it.


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